beginning layout WIP or something like that

So...my teacher is probably going to think this sucks because it's not animation-y or whatever, but whatevs. I did this one based on this assignment on 'hiding from or looking at/peeping'. Essentially, it's a POV shot. I wanted to do something that wasn't as obvious as the "kids looking at something they shouldn't be looking at", as well as make it a bit self reflexive of the concept. My first thought was to have the viewer be a mirror so that a killer or person peeping would be perpendicular to the view instead of straight on (which is the most obvious/ what everyone tends to do) to the 'camera'. So this is set in a halfway house or a crappy-ish motel influenced by the 20s to the 50s era, with hints of modernism (like the neon lady signs and the lady-clock). A lady of the house kills men while they are involved with the escorts (who take their money) and a police waits outside (either breaking up the party or going to 'score' himself hahaha). I wanted to do something that would be fun for me, and had some sense of story, even though it's probably going to be so hated because there are no kids in the story or ribbons or chipmunks, or planes or whatever else is supposed to be cute and appeal to children. I guess I won't get chosen to work on R@inb0wBr!te the movie 10. Uh..oh well....